Saturday, July 29, 2023

Project 23 - Update - Actually Writing the Station Mystery

I’m trying to get better about getting things done and finishing projects. Of course, I’ve decided to try finishing an 80,000 - 100,000 word novel. I hear that this may not be the easiest way to get practice in.

Still I’ve been working on writing a “shitty first draft"1 of my Station Mystery novel for the last few weeks. When I wrote about the book back in January I mentioned not being too sure how to go forward since I’m usually trying to do so many things at once. I’ve decided to focus on the Station Mystery as my primary project and try to prioritise working on it. So for these last few weeks I’ve set a goal of writing for half an hour a day, which I do after the things I have to get done, but before the things I should probably do. I’m not really consistent yet, but I’m moving in the right direction.

Half-an-hour is not a lot of time. I’m only able to write about 500 words if I write the whole time. On the other hand, I’m having fun, I’m actually doing it and 500 words a day is so much better than 0. So for now I’m going to say that it’s a good start.

Chart of words written, with 3 chapters growing over time with the total ending just over 6000 words.

When writing, I’ve instituted a general rule that once I finish a paragraph, I’m not allowed to go back and edit it and this is really helping me to get stuff on the page. I am allowing myself to leave comments in the margin as I go so I can either fix a thing, or just note something or just point out just how shitty the draft is. This gives me just enough of a push that I can let what I’m writing go without getting hung up on it being good or even making that much sense.

A blurred view of green and yellow stickies on a yellow rectangle.

Since I first wrote about the Station Mystery at the beginning of January I did two starts on the first chapter and gave up, but my new rule is helping get things on the page. I’ve also rewritten the outline, with less text but more sticky notes in Miro. Those two outlines have helped me work out what needs to be said and what I’m supposed to be doing in each scene. Since it *is* a murder mystery, it’s also helpful for figuring out how the mystery fits together.

Comments from a google doc saying: 'Weird?' 'Weird.' make sure to make formal bow a thing. No shaking hands and generally not much touching non-family

I’ve also started using Obsidian to build a world book for the story. I’ve been using it increasingly to keep track of things at work and it’s a really helpful way to track things like relationships. I’m trying not to world build too much and it helps to be able to make decisions on the fly.

At this rate I hope I’ll be finished with the first draft by the end of the year and by then I’ll have a whole extra year’s practice of writing and be ready for what ever happens next.

1Lamott, A. (1980). Bird by bird. Bantam Doubleday Dell Publishing Group

Sunday, July 16, 2023

Video Games of June 2023

June was a relatively chill month. I mostly put in an hour or two on Tears of the Kingdom and also tried to get other stuff done. I felt pretty happy with the month. 

I've stopped recording mobile games. I've also mostly stopped playing them, but I picked up the full blown successor to "Seedship", "Beyond the Chiron Gate". It's a text-based game, where you make decisions about building a crew to investigate a wormhole network with the nifty little caveat that you can never go back to a system after you've found it. I've enjoyed it quite a bit, although the fact that some of the descriptions are repeated frequently enough that it makes it a little hard to get really invested in the lives of any of your little team flying through space. Certainly worth the price to play.


My top five games (by play time) for June were:

  1. Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom - ToTK has been really good. As I said in May, it a lot denser and more vibrant than Breath of the Wild. The ways they've expanded the core concepts in BoTW are really fun and there's usually at least "lne more thing" that I want to do every time I play. The story telling is also quite well done and they balanced the story with the messing around really well this time.
    Screenshot. Link looks over three boats fused together and outfitted with batteries and drive fans.

  2. Advance Wars 1+2: Re-Boot Camp - I played the first few missions and had some fun with Advance Wars, but then ground to a halt when I hit a level I couldn't solve. If you've been reading for a while, you'll know that as much as I *like* tactics games, I'm often not very good at them, and games in the Advance Wars style really seem to stymie me. I find I'm often slow to solve puzzles in a lot of cases, and tactics games that don't give me an unreasonable breadth of actions tend to be a struggle. I may go back, I think they did some good work in the rerelease, but the core game play hasn't been my jam.
    Screenshot. The aftermath of two units fighting, a head shot of one sad commander with nothing and a grinning one with a bunch of tanks on the other side.

  3. Mario Kart 8: Deluxe - Vroom vroom, as always. Lately I've been looking for something that's easy to play but kind of interesting for those quick moments when I don't want to risk getting sucked into Tears of the Kingdom. Maybe time to look into reviving my gaming PC.
    Screenshot. Rosalina jumps her Harley style bike over a glittering lagoon.

  4. Donkey Kong Country (NSO - SNES) - Been watching Dan and Dan play through Donkey Kong Country 2 on PlayFrame. I figured I'd see how it felt to play again and how far I could get. SNES platformers from this era also kinda match for that easy to get into game I'm looking for. It's also intersting to look at how games from that era weren't good at really communicating with players how to do well (or even to play) which I think is a mix of a lot of business decissions (don't want those kids renting these games) and technical ones (we already have all the sprites we can have on screen). As a kid, DKC was really impressive, looking back on it from today it seems really limited.
    Screenshot. Diddy Kong cheers beating a boss while standing in a gigantic hoard of bananas, next to a gigantic banana. Donkey Kong stares at him lifeless and unanimated.


Here's my total play time chart for June:



And here's a chart of how much I've played over the month:




Sunday, July 09, 2023

Books of June 2023

Reading

Here is my updated infographic for the books I've read in 2023 - June Edition.

Stats in June - (Year to Date)

Reading Stats

Books Read - 13 (42)Pages Read - 3495 (17335)

Books Read

Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 20) by Tomohito Oda Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 21) by Tomohito Oda
Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 22) by Tomohito Oda Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 23) by Tomohito Oda
The Heroic Legand of Arslan (Volume 16) by Hiromu Arakawa and Yoshiki Tanaka Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 24) by Tomohito Oda
The Heroic Legand of Arslan (Volume 17) by Hiromu Arakawa and Yoshiki Tanaka Empire of Sand by Tasha Suri
Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 25) by Tomohito Oda To Say Nothing of the Dog by Connie Willis
Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 25) by Charles Todd Murder in an Irish Village by Carlene O'Connor
Magic Bleeds by Ilona Andrews

Collage of the covers of the 13 books listed above. June 2023 Covers

Authors

Adrian Tchaikovsky - (1)Alexander McCall Smith - (2)
Angeline Boulley - (1)Hiromu Arakawa - 2 (2)
Ann Leckie - (2)Brandon Sanderson - (1)
Carlene O'Connor - 1 (1)Charles Todd - 1 (4)
Connie Willis - 1 (2)Dan Moren - (2)
Ed Yong - (1)Elizabeth Bear - (1)
Elle Cosimano - (1)Fatima Ali - (1)
Ilona Andrews - 1 (3)Isaac Asimov - (1)
Jim Butcher - (1)Louise Penny - (1)
N. K. Jemisin - (1)Patrica Briggs - (4)
Robin McKinley - (1)Stephen King - (1)
Rick Riorden - (1)Tasha Suri - 1 (1)
Timothy Zhan - (1)Tomohito Oda - 6 (14)
Yoshiki Tanaka - 2 (2)

A word cloud of all the authors above with Tomohito Oda in the largest size.2023 Author Cloud - June Update

Publishing


Publication Range

Earliest Book - 1997 (1953)Most Recent Book - 2022 (2022)

Publications by Decades

2020s - 8 (27)2010s - 3 (11)
2000s - 1 (9)1990s - 1 (4)
1950s - (1)

Books

Source

Borrowed From Public Library - 5 (32)Borrowed From Friends - (2)
My Audible Library - (1)My libro.fm Library - (1)
My "Kindle" Library - (5)My Kobo Library - 8 (12)

Formats

Audio Book - 3 (25)eBook - 2 (10)
eBook (Comic) - 8 (16)Hardcover - (1)

Saturday, July 08, 2023

Books of May 2023

Reading

Here is my updated infographic for the books I've read in 2023 - May Edition.

Stats in May - (Year to Date)

Reading Stats

Books Read - 11 (39)Pages Read - 2979 (13840)

Books Read

Fairy Tale by Stephen King Savor: A Chef's Hunger for More
Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 13) by Tomohito Oda Magic Strikes by Ilona Andrews
Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 14) by Tomohito Oda Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 15) by Tomohito Oda
Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 16) by Tomohito Oda Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 17) by Tomohito Oda
Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 18) by Tomohito Oda Komi Can't Communicate (Volume 19) by Tomohito Oda
A Duty to the Dead by Charles Todd

Collage of the covers of the 11 books listed above. May 2023 Covers

Authors

Adrian Tchaikovsky - (1)Alexander McCall Smith - (2)
Angeline Boulley - (1)Fatima Ali - 1 (1)
Ann Leckie - (2)Brandon Sanderson - (1)
Charles Todd - 1 (3)Connie Willis - (1)
Dan Moren - (2)Ed Yong - (1)
Elizabeth Bear - (1)Elle Cosimano - (1)
Ilona Andrews - 1 (2)Isaac Asimov - (1)
Jim Butcher - (1)Louise Penny - (1)
N. K. Jemisin - (1)Patrica Briggs - (4)
Robin McKinley - (1)Stephen King - 1 (1)
Rick Riorden - (1)Timothy Zhan - (1)
Tomohito Oda - 7 (8)

A word cloud of all the authors above with Tomohito Oda in the largest size.2023 Author Cloud - May Update

Publishing


Publication Range

Earliest Book - 1953Most Recent Book - 2022

Publications by Decades

2020s - 7 (19)2010s - 3 (8)
2000s - 1 (8)1990s - (3)
1950s - (1)

Books

Source

Borrowed From Public Library - 3 (27)Borrowed From Friends - 1 (2)
My Audible Library - (1)My libro.fm Library - (1)
My "Kindle" Library - 4 (5)My Kobo Library - 4 (4)

Formats

Audio Book - 4 (22)eBook - (8)
eBook (Comic) - 7 (8)Hardcover - (1)

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